Fix wording in about.html for improved clarity

Corrected phrasing for clarity and consistency.

Author: Gmac4247

about.html

@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ <h2 style="margin:12px">Once around 2018 I was wondering how to calculate the ar
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 Meanwhile I got curious about the properties of other shapes, and I figured that the volume of a sphere equals the cubed value of the square root of its cross-sectional area, just like a cube.</h2>
-<p style="margin:12px">It's quite hard to physically measure the volume of a ball accurately, but there's a significant difference between the result of my V=(√(3.2)r)³ formula and the conventional "4 / 3 × π × r³". 
+<p style="margin:12px">It's quite hard to physically accurately measure the volume of a ball, but there's a significant difference between the result of my V=(√(3.2)r)³ formula and the conventional " 4 / 3 × π × r³ ". 
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 With the limited resources that I had, I conducted some experiments.
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ <h2 style="margin:12px">I named my framework the Core Geometric System ™ and p
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 The expression was unique back then. I came up with it. I never read it anywhere else before. Back then I searched for it to find out if anyone else is using it, and there were no results for that term. 
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-Interestingly, now language models explain it like some general term without even referencing my work. 
+Interestingly, now language models explain it like some generic term without even referencing my work. 
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 The trademark symbol indicates that it's not to be confused with some generic term. While it might be surprising in the 21st century, this is the first and only geometric system in accordance with the core principles of elementary mathematics.</p>
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