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 ## what are these blogs and interviews about?
 
-Aloha, Konichiwa, Namaste and Hi to everyone reading this blog. The open-source practice at Wipro, is in the midst of building a new open-source community inside of Wipro. The end goal is to have a structured community, that maximises the effectiveness of our resources and most importantly, gives our developers a better experience in their journey of contributing to open-source. However, Wipro has been a long time contributor to various open-source projects, over the last two decades. The goal of this blog series, is to find the champions who lead this efforts and connect them with you, our reader! We have a bunch of interviews planned and as we along, we will introduce you to a bunch of really cool people.
+Aloha, Konichiwa, Namaste and Hi to everyone reading this blog. The Open Source Community within Wipro is at a niche stage and we are growing each day.The goal is to have an engaged and informed community that maximises the effectiveness of our resources and most importantly, gives our developers a better experience in their journey of contributing to open-source. Wipro has been a long time contributor to various open-source projects, over the last two decades. The goal of this blog series, is to find the champions who lead open source efforts at Wipro and connect them with you, our readers! We have a bunch of interviews planned and as we go along, we will introduce you to a bunch of really cool people whose journeys wiil inspire you.
 
-Each blog is accompanied by a video of the interview, which you are welcome to watch and like and comment on. If, you really like us, you may also follow our channel!
+Each blog is accompanied by a video of the interview, which you are welcome to watch and like and comment on and definitely tell us what kind of content you would want to watch and learn from this series.
 
 # Introduction
 
-The open-source community is driven by two things: the spirit of collaboration and the spirit of hacking. By collaboration, I mean, the willingness to share your knowledge and experiences and by hacking, I mean, the urge to experiment, dismantle and make new things. Our very first interview is with an individual, who embodies both of these ideals.
+The open-source community is driven by two things: the spirit of collaboration and the spirit of hacking, the willingness to share your knowledge and experiences constitutes collaboration and the urge to experiment, dismantle and make new things constitutes hacking. Our very first interview is with an individual, who embodies both of these ideals.
 
 Satish is a long-time Wiproite. He has been at Wipro since 1995.
 
-Innovation and experimentation is the life-blood of a company like Wipro since, the work we do in technology is never-ending. Through our interview with Satish, he shared the many
+Innovation and experimentation is the life-blood of a company like Wipro since the work we do in technology is never-ending. Through our interview with Satish, we learnt about his venture into open source at Wipro, the roadblocks and how he started his journey with the most hot and trending technology, "Kubernetes".
 
 ## Introduction
 
 ## The interview, itself
 
 we will give the appropriate timestamps to the conversations from the interview
 
-Satish joined Wipro in 1995, almost 26 years, ago...
-Started as a test engineer for UNIX platform
-Went onto participate in Development and bug fixes
-Moved into testing practice
-and then went into cloud practice
-working on docker and then,
-finally on kubernetes
+Satish joined Wipro 25 years ago and is a veteran here, he started as a test engineer for UNIX platform, since then has successfully carried out various roles of a module lead, test lead, Project Manager, Program Manager for migration, Architect / Consultant. He got the opoortunity to learn and work with various platforms/domains/technologies at Wipro like embedded Unix, Telecom, Storage, cloud, containerization etc and this inspires him to stay with the Organization & continue the learning.  
+He has moved into Cloud practice, worked with Docker and finally on Kubernetes.
 
 ## Satish's work in GNOME project
 
 In 2002, Satish was working on integrating the GNOME desktop environment into Sun Solaris operating system for Sun Microsystems.
 He was the testing lead leading a team for more than 10 developers, designing and documenting more than 4000 unit tests during 
 his time working on the GNOME project.
 
-### what was your experience like working on integrating an open-source project into a proprietary product?
+### what was your experience working on integrating an open-source project into a proprietary product?
 
-> There was a bunch of secrecy, our clients had made it very clear that their involvement was not to be exposed, in any
-> conversations with the GNOME community. But, at the same time, they were adamant that whatever could be given back to the
-> community, needed to be contributed back.
+The Open Source concept was at a very niche stage at the point when Satish was working with the GNOME project. There were clear instructions from the client on no involvement exposure on any conversations with the GNOME community, a bunch of secerecy was to be maintained however whatever could be given back to the community, needed to be contributed back.
 
 ### what were the major technical challenges you faced?
 
-> There was very poor documentation at that time and the project was quite unstable. Our builds would break everytime we pulled
-> new code from the CVS repository.
+Due to concept being very new, there was lack of documentation  and the project was quite unstable.Builds would break everytime a new code was pulled from the CVS repository.
 
-We were able to find Satish's [emails](https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2002-March/msg00145.html) from the gnome mailing list, where he asked for status of the help documentation.
 
 ## Satish's work on testing data-storage solution