From 130612b2e5b1f1f75bbccfb9a615fd2e9a67512d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Wind4Greg <gregb@grotto-networking.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Feb 2025 11:08:34 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Clarity improvements. Fix wording to add missing
 explanatory text. Break into two sentences.

---
 index.html | 9 +++++++--
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 56d35fe..1bd7cbb 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -3330,8 +3330,13 @@ <h2>Understanding Proof Sets and Proof Chains</h2>
 <em>secretVPE/publicVPE</em>, respectively.
       </p>
       <p>
-When constructing a [=proof set=] where each of the signatories signs an
-|inputDocument| without concern, we construct a proof symbolically as:
+When multiple signatories intend to sign an |inputDocument| and the ordering of
+those signatures are not of concern and there are no dependencies amongst the
+signatures then a [=proof set=] is typically a more straight forward
+construction.
+      </p>
+      <p>
+We construct a proof symbolically as:
       </p>
       <pre class="example nohighlight" title="Symbolic expression of how a proof is created">
 {

From daaf2f5096d4447e469ef0ea6dafbfb5288d929d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Greg Bernstein <gregb@grotto-networking.com>
Date: Wed, 19 Feb 2025 08:12:50 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Appendix on Proof Sets/Chains: Clarity improvements --
 further wording improvements.

Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <tthibodeau@openlinksw.com>
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 index.html | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 1bd7cbb..f233514 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -3330,9 +3330,9 @@ <h2>Understanding Proof Sets and Proof Chains</h2>
 <em>secretVPE/publicVPE</em>, respectively.
       </p>
       <p>
-When multiple signatories intend to sign an |inputDocument| and the ordering of
-those signatures are not of concern and there are no dependencies amongst the
-signatures then a [=proof set=] is typically a more straight forward
+When multiple signatories intend to sign an |inputDocument|, the ordering of
+those signatures is not of concern, and there are no dependencies amongst the
+signatures, then a [=proof set=] is typically a more straightforward
 construction.
       </p>
       <p>

From 302ead628b914f16e6db0d8307306bb8d60cc015 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Greg Bernstein <gregb@grotto-networking.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Feb 2025 10:15:12 -0800
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Appendix on Proof Sets/Chains: Clarity improvements --
 additional wording improvements.

Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <tthibodeau@openlinksw.com>
---
 index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index f233514..0ad6311 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -3330,7 +3330,7 @@ <h2>Understanding Proof Sets and Proof Chains</h2>
 <em>secretVPE/publicVPE</em>, respectively.
       </p>
       <p>
-When multiple signatories intend to sign an |inputDocument|, the ordering of
+If multiple signatories intend to sign an |inputDocument|, the ordering of
 those signatures is not of concern, and there are no dependencies amongst the
 signatures, then a [=proof set=] is typically a more straightforward
 construction.