Breakout Room 6 - Implementing Mad Libs Generator

[anselrognlie]

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[greenslippers]

Good work overall. But there are some places that need your attention. Please take a look at the line by line comments.

[greenslippers]

Consider adding "second" for clarity:

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	second_noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
	second_noun = input("Choose a second noun: ")

[greenslippers]

Consider adding "third" for clarity:

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	third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
	third_noun = input("Choose a third noun: ")

[greenslippers]

Typo in seonc_noun:

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	print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",")
	print ("For a duck may be somebody's", second_noun,",")

[greenslippers]

A quick note: in Python // isn't valid for comments. Replace it with #:

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	//Loop back to this point once code finishes
	/# Loop back to this point once code finishes

[greenslippers]

See our comment for line 2:

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	// All the questions that the program asks the user
	# All the questions that the program asks the user

[greenslippers]

See our comment for the line 2:

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	// Displays the story based on the users input
	# Displays the story based on the users input

[greenslippers]

See our comment for the line 2:

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	// Loop back to "loop = 1"
	# Loop back to "loop = 1"

[greenslippers]

Consider simplifying this line to loop += 1:

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	loop = loop + 1
	loop += 1

[greenslippers]

Suggest to change to loop <= 10 to implement the requirements:

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	while (loop < 9):
	while (loop <= 10):

[greenslippers]

Consider deleting the line for consistency:

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print ()