[0주차] 6기 객체지향 코드 연습(최세린) #7
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0702Yoon
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특정 부분에서 잘짰다고 생각하는 부분도 존재하고 노력하신 게 보여서 좋습니다!
하지만 전체적으로 "매직넘버" 처리가 안되어있고, controller의 역할이 좀 많아보여요. 한번 분리해보시죠
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| if (trimmed.isEmpty()) { | ||
| throw new IllegalArgumentException("자동차 이름이 공백"); | ||
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| if (trimmed.length() > 5) { | ||
| throw new IllegalArgumentException("이름 오류"); | ||
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View에서 검사까지 하도록 일부로 노리신 건가요? 책임 분리 해볼까요?
또한 현재 예외 메시지만을 보고는 정확한 도메인 이해가 잘 되지 않아요.
| //경주차 이름 입력 | ||
| public String[] getMemberNames() { | ||
| System.out.println("경주할 자동차 이름을 입력하세요.(이름은 쉼표(,) 기준으로 구분)"); | ||
| List<String> lst = List.of(scanner.nextLine().split(",")); |
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split을 통해 배열로도 받을 수 있는 데 List로 받으신 이유가 특별히 있나요?
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| public class Controller { | ||
| private final View view; | ||
| private final List<Member> members = new ArrayList<>(); |
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현재는 무조건 하나의 게임만 존재하기 떄문에 이렇게 구현해도 괜찮지만, 한번 이 Controller가 상태를 갖지 않도록 해볼까요?
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| private String name; | ||
| private int go; |
| //경주차 간거 표시 | ||
| public void printProgress(List<Member> members) { | ||
| for (Member m : members) { | ||
| System.out.println(m.getName() + " : " + "-".repeat(m.getGo())); |
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member에서 get을 사용하지 않고 값을 보여주도록 해볼까요?
get을 쓰면 안좋은 이유가 뭐가 있을까요?
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