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9-48: Minor writing style refinements to improve consistency and tone.The article content is well-organized with clear sections and substantive achievements. A few minor writing style improvements would enhance polish:
- Line 11: "have a look at" — For American English consistency, prefer "take a look at."
- Line 11: "even hard to know" — Consider a more direct phrasing, e.g., "difficult to track" or "challenging to capture."
- Line 18: "completely new protocol" — Strengthen with "entirely new" or simply "novel protocol."
- Overall: Six exclamation marks across ~1856 characters may feel excessive. Consider reducing to 2–3 for a more measured, professional tone.
🔎 Proposed refinements
- 2023 has been an incredible year for Djed and for the Alliance. We have achieved so much. Since we are a completely decentralized meta-organization that does not even have a "core team", it is even hard to know everything that we have achieved, because we don't always have visibility about everything that everybody else is doing. So, let's have a look at just some of our major 2023 highlights. + 2023 has been an incredible year for Djed and for the Alliance. We have achieved so much. Since we are a completely decentralized meta-organization that does not even have a "core team", it is difficult to track everything that we have achieved, because we don't always have visibility about everything that everybody else is doing. So, let's take a look at just some of our major 2023 highlights. - 1 completely new protocol researched: Gluon! + 1 entirely new protocol researched: Gluon. - ~6x increase in the number of real followers of our Twitter account! + ~6x increase in the number of real followers of our Twitter account. - ~5x increase in the number of participants in our Discord server! + ~5x increase in the number of participants in our Discord server.
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[style] ~11-~11: To elevate your writing, try using a synonym here.
Context: ...not even have a “core team”, it is even hard to know everything that we have achieve...
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[locale-violation] ~11-~11: In American English, “take a look” is more commonly used.
Context: ...that everybody else is doing. So, let's have a look at just some of our major 2023 highligh...
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[style] ~18-~18: Consider using a different adverb to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...ilkomeda, and Shu, used in Zephyr. - 1 completely new protocol researched: Gluon! - The ...
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[style] ~48-~48: Using many exclamation marks might seem excessive (in this case: 6 exclamation marks for a text that’s 1856 characters long)
Context: ...er of participants in our Discord server!
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public/articles/retrospective-2023.md (1)
1-7: Front-matter is well-structured and complete.The YAML metadata is properly formatted with all necessary fields: title, author, date, image, and excerpt. The image path references
/images/2023-in-review.webp—verify that this asset exists and is properly committed alongside this article.
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Hi @john-walter-munene ! I would like to merge this one, but github is saying that there are merge conflicts. Could you resolve them? |
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