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…m/dimav78/docs-auditor-10.8 into dimav78-feature/10.8/azure-files-and-OMBA
Fixed broken link that prevented from building
…res, managing organizations for parent org features
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Pull Request Review: 1Secure MSP Terminology CleanupSummaryThis PR successfully updates MSP-focused terminology to be more inclusive of direct end-user sales. The changes are well-executed and consistent across all 11 files. The approach is appropriate and maintains clarity while broadening the target audience. ✅ Strengths1. Consistent Terminology Updates
2. Appropriate Scope
3. Good Context Preservation
🔍 Issues Found1. Inconsistent Terminology Usage (Minor)The PR uses two different approaches:
Locations:
Recommendation: Standardize to always use the singular form in the parenthetical: "(e.g., Managed Service Provider)" for consistency, even when "organizations" is plural. 2. Incomplete Header Update (Minor)In docs/1secure/admin/organizations/addingusers/addingusers.md:29, the phrase "the organization shall assign" could be clearer as "the managing organization shall assign" to match the section header context. 3. Table Header Alignment ConsistencyIn roledefinitions.md, the "MSP" column was changed to "Administrator" across all tables. This is correct and improves clarity, but ensure this aligns with actual user role names in the application UI. 📝 Suggestions for Enhancement1. Documentation GlossaryConsider adding a glossary entry at the beginning of the admin section defining:
2. Consistency in Parent/Child TerminologyThe PR uses both "managing/managed organization" and "parent/child organization" interchangeably. Consider standardizing to one pair throughout. 🔒 Security Considerations✅ No security concerns - documentation-only changes ⚡ Performance Considerations✅ N/A - documentation-only changes 🧪 Test Coverage✅ N/A - documentation-only changes 📊 Code Quality Rating8.5/10 - Excellent execution with minor consistency improvements needed ✨ RecommendationsMust Fix (before merge):None - the PR is mergeable as-is Should Fix (recommended):
Nice to Have (future enhancement):
🎯 ConclusionThis is a well-executed documentation update that successfully modernizes the language to reflect the broader customer base. The changes are appropriate, consistent, and maintain backward compatibility through clarifying parentheticals. Approval Status: ✅ Approved with minor suggestions Review generated by Claude Code |
In many areas, documentation retained MSP-focused language. Now that we sell to end users, is looks confusing, so these references were updated.