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Good start, from reviewer 1.
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| #Mad Libs Generator Project | |||
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | |||
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Let's consider using standard python commenting practices (right now this code throws a SyntaxError).
| // Displays the story based on the users input | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") |
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Make sure your variable names are spelled correctly! This throws an error.
| noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| plural_noun = input("Choose a plural noun: ") | ||
| second_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| place = input("Name a place: ") | ||
| adjective = input("Choose an adjective (Describing word): ") | ||
| third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") |
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Consider using a data structure to store these variables, perhaps a dictionary?
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place) | ||
| print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".") | ||
| print () | ||
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") |
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Perhaps an f-string would be helpful here!
Additionally, your code is printing out an extra space after every variable, so an f-string could help address it, or fix your input parameters above.
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Maybe you want to use a function instead of hanging code.
| loop = 1 | ||
| while (loop < 9): |
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Since the loop starts at 1, you are looping 8 times, instead of the required 10.
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