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22 changes: 22 additions & 0 deletions main.py
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Consider a for loop for the print statement logic. Also using f stings might make your code cleaner and easier to read

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#Mad Libs Generator Project
//Loop back to this point once code finishes
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Consider leaving comments that explain implementation choices rather than describing what the code is doing.

using#is more pythonic choice over //

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loop = 1
while (loop < 9):
// All the questions that the program asks the user
noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
plural_noun = input("Choose a plural noun: ")
second_noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
place = input("Name a place: ")
adjective = input("Choose an adjective (Describing word): ")
third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
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consider using a class for the input variables, so this could be reusable as we scale in the future

// Displays the story based on the users input
print ("------------------------------------------")
print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun)
print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",")
print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place)
print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".")
print ()
print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",")
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Consider re-formatting your code, it could use spaces after the commas
"Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) -> "Be kind to your", noun, "- footed", plural_noun)

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Consider re-formatting your code, it could use spaces after the last word of the string, currently you might receive an unexpected format

print ("Well it is.")
print ("------------------------------------------")
// Loop back to "loop = 1"
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Consider leaving comments that explain implementation choices rather than describing what the code is doing.

loop = loop + 1