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Breakout Room 1 - Implementing Mad Libs Generator #2
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| #Mad Libs Generator Project | ||||||||||||||
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | ||||||||||||||
| loop = 1 | ||||||||||||||
| while (loop < 9): | ||||||||||||||
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This while loop is incorrectly formatted to have parentheses. This is JavaScript syntax and this should be in Python. Another thing is that it looks like this loop only runs a total of 8 times, but the project requires generating 10 stories. In this case, a for loop might be better since we know the exact number of times we need to loop.
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| // All the questions that the program asks the user | ||||||||||||||
| noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||||||||||||||
| plural_noun = input("Choose a plural noun: ") | ||||||||||||||
| second_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||||||||||||||
| place = input("Name a place: ") | ||||||||||||||
| adjective = input("Choose an adjective (Describing word): ") | ||||||||||||||
| third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||||||||||||||
| // Displays the story based on the users input | ||||||||||||||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||||||||||||||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||||||||||||||
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Consider using string interpolation instead of string concatenation. This makes it less likely to make formatting mistakes when combining strings. |
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| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") | ||||||||||||||
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It appears there's a typo here with |
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| print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place) | ||||||||||||||
| print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".") | ||||||||||||||
| print () | ||||||||||||||
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||||||||||||||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||||||||||||||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||||||||||||||
| // Loop back to "loop = 1" | ||||||||||||||
| loop = loop + 1 | ||||||||||||||
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On lines 2, 5, 12, 22 the incorrect syntax for comments is being used. For Python, we use # for commenting, this looks like JavaScript.